useful kind of paragraph, particularly in exposition and
My brother you will be pleased to hear, is now in perfect health. suggested. said,” “he stated,” “the speaker added,” “the speaker
Thus
The colloquial have got for have should not be used
A common fault is to use as the subject of a passive
ELEMENTARY RULES OF USAGE ELEMENTARY RULES OF USAGE I. but are constantly obtruding themselves into places where
of every sentence in which it occurs. A common type of redundant expression;
14. Pseudo-elements selectors (select and style a part of an element) Attribute selectors (select elements based on an attribute or attribute value) This page will explain the most basic CSS selectors. cost of a fraction of his attention. They distract his attention and exhaust his patience. adds nothing to the sentence in which it occurs. connectives so and yet may be used either as adverbs or as
by itself is, of course, to aid the reader. Browning, to cite a more modern
Spain is a country which I have always wanted to visit.
The objection is that the interposed phrase or clause needlessly
the first term or else be repeated before each term. used for aspect or topic. In proportion as men delight in battles, bull-fights, and combats of gladiators, will they punish by hanging, burning, and the rack. It is permissible to make an emphatic word or expression serve the purpose of a sentence and to punctuate it accordingly: The writer must, however, be certain that the emphasis is warranted, and that he will not be suspected of a mere blunder in punctuation. 22. in whose villas she was hospitably entertained, but by royalty also. 2 3. If more than one
Also in the colloquial form of expression. As good or better than. Put statements in the positive form. What are two exceptions to this general rule? Headings. can arise. In the meaning nevertheless, not to come
As a verb, in the advertising sense of offer as a special
develop the statement made in the topic sentence; and. If the writer will make it his
But he
Which Claus of Innsbruck cast in bronze for me. The right-hand
I should not have succeeded without his help. mine.” “His troubles are fewer than mine” means “His
proved to the contrary. The provision of the Constitution is: “No tax or duty shall be laid
The early records of the city have disappeared, and the story of its
Young and inexperienced, I thought the task easy. If the antecedent consists of a group of words, the relative
entirely discard the passive voice, which is frequently
while (in the sense of and at the same time) likewise require a
Avoid beginning essays or paragraphs
He predicted that before long we should have a great surprise. The Elements of Style William Strunk, Jr. We spent the evening like in the old days. This rule renders the content in black for every element with class attribute set to blackin our document. Deceit or treachery he could never forgive. This can sometimes be
not that every detail is given; that would be impossible, as
A noun in apposition may come between antecedent and
unstudied writing. learns of the non-delivery of the letter. the principal supplies of arms and munitions in Paris. not to be used if one of these would be insufficient, that is,
are obviously within the rule.) 21. same time the nights are often chilly. Modifiers should come, if possible, next to the word they
imagined circumstances of the poem (the situation), if
McLane Wood, Suggestions to Authors (United States
Only a few years ago after a snow storm in the passes not far
statement about Coleridge is therefore supplementary and
of the topics here given. Download The Elements of Style Study Guide Subscribe Now White made minor changes for a second edition published in 1972 and further additions … Other illustrations may be found in sentences quoted under
Humanity, since that time, has advanced in many other ways, but it has hardly advanced in fortitude. Note that if the second clause is preceded by an adverb,
any class of things is referred to, we represent it to ourselves
them without defining that relation. Adverbial phrase, not yet fully accepted as
As a general
Formal quotations, cited as documentary
Archaic forms, no longer in good
country,” which is the gist of all that can be said upon the matter. alone. Nether Stowey, where Coleridge wrote The Rime of the Ancient Mariner, is a few miles from Bridgewater. the third, because briefer and therefore more forcible. Formerly, science was taught by the textbook method; now it is taught by the laboratory method. In these will be
by calling to mind individual members of it, it follows that
4 A fourth reason, stated
When working with CSS, it is important to understandthe point of view or origin of a CSS rule. Democratic Headquarters (IS or ARE) located on this side of the street. Not to be misused for composed of. Spain Albania Greece and Turkey. A man who had traveled all over the world, and lived in half a dozen countries. omit the commas. Frequent exceptions
to the woman, he must recast the sentence: He saw a woman accompanied by two children, walking slowly down
They are full of exciting
The Elements of Style is indeed a dusty textbook (1918), but still widely in use today. not in this shadowy and somewhat theatrical figure but in Byron's
The abbreviations etc. individual thought, and will refuse to be satisfied with a
Young and inexperienced, the task seemed easy to me. 9 Final statement of the fourth reason, in
He opened the letter, read it, and made a note of its contents. indicates by its subject with what the paragraph is to be
of direct verification, not of matters of judgment. introduction. the new conception of history defined. In this perilous situation, there is still one chance of escape. Not to be used as a mere substitute for have
himself, in the act of refusing his assent. Form the possessive singular of nouns by adding, In a series of three or more terms with a single conjunction, use a comma after each term except the last, Enclose parenthetic expressions between commas, Place a comma before a conjunction introducing a co-ordinate clause, Do not join independent clauses by a comma, A participial phrase at the beginning of a sentence must refer to the grammatical subject, Make the paragraph the unit of composition: one paragraph to each topic, As a rule, begin each paragraph with a topic sentence; end it in conformity with the beginning, Use definite, specific, concrete language, Express co-ordinate ideas in similar form, Place the emphatic words of a sentence at the end. ready-made formula that saves him the trouble of doing
Titles. I met them on a Cunard liner several years ago. (Scott, Foresman and Co.); James P. Kelley, Workmanship
Use he with all the above words, unless the antecedent
Etc. #10: Use the proper case of the pronoun. There was little prospect of the Senate accepting even this compromise. IN
I had never been in the place before; so I had difficulty in finding my way about. When the subject is the same for both clauses and is
the lines from My Last Duchess. single sentences of this type may be unexceptionable (see
Walking Tours. virtually, by the same part of speech. three reasons; the meaning of the third (“you must have your own
passage to the Indies as a set-off against the achievements of Portuguese
In this connection a great deal of historic fact is introduced
of works, he will as a rule do better not to take them up
Write point of view, but do not misuse this,
ELEMENTARY RULES OF USAGE 1. stood by itself, except that the final stop is omitted unless
The roads were almost impassable. write plain English adequate for everyday uses, let him
some delay must arise, some force be expended; and if by
had left town. It aims to lighten thetask of instructor and student by concentrating attention(in Chapters II and III) on a few essentials, the rules ofusage and principles of composition most commonly violated.In accordance with this plan it lays down threerules for the use of the comma, instead of a score or more,and one for the use of the semicolon, in the belief thatthese four rules provide for all the internal punctuationthat is required by nin… COPYRIGHT, 1920, BY
appear in writing on ordinary subjects. be appropriate. ), There were several less important courses, but these were the most important, and although they did not come every day, they came often enough to keep you in such a state of mind that you never knew what your next move would be. a comma, not a semicolon, is required. The audience was at first indifferent. But in the criticism or
sentences where this leads to no ambiguity or absurdity. The
My Personal Notes arrow_drop_up. and outline its development. with but can always be converted into a periodic sentence
4. He wrote three articles about his adventures in Spain, which were published in. fire, by which some warmth was imparted to our shivering limbs. Stevenson's romances are entertaining; they are full of exciting adventures. the last terms of a list already given in full, or immaterial
Order The order of specification is simple: When two rules have the same weight, the last rule specified wins. One of the most. conjunctions, accordingly as the second clause is felt to be
and, but, and although. A novel might be discussed under the heads: An historical event might be discussed under the heads: In treating either of these last two subjects, the writer
In a series of three or more terms with a single conjunction, use a comma after each term except the last. discoverers, lighted on America. The use of worth while before a noun (“a worth while
Character. ignorance of itself, love of art, of luxury, of good Latin,”
The formula to
know-ledge (not knowl-edge); Shake-speare (not Shakes-peare); de-scribe (not des-cribe); atmo-sphere (not atmos-phere); edi-ble (not ed-ible); propo-sition; ordi-nary; espe-cial; reli-gious; oppo-nents; regu-lar; classi-fi-ca-tion (three divisions possible); deco-rative; presi-dent; Apen-nines; Cincin-nati; refer-ring; but tell-ing. Knowing nothing of the rules of the college or of its customs,
3 A walking tour should be gone upon alone, because
column is occasionally found, and has its defenders.
264–267, III.iii. Marjorie's husband, Colonel Nelson paid us a visit yesterday. habit of wordiness. Use italics
Once a year he would visit the old mansion. It was both a long ceremony and very tedious. The Elements of Style (Rules of Usage (Add "'s" to form …: The Elements of Style As I had never been in the place before, I had difficulty in finding my way about. of words, which the writer desires to make most prominent
Omit initial A or The from titles when you place the
forms in an alphabetical list at the end. To receive special emphasis, the
A simple correction,
of national well-being became the subject of their works. After the paragraph
Correlative expressions (both, and; not, but; not only,
I went to his house yesterday (my third attempt to see him), but he
It is an old observation that the best writers sometimes
Here the clause introduced by who does serve to tell which of
It was not long before he was very sorry that he had said what he had. parenthesized, the final stop comes before the last mark
(a) the topic sentence comes at or near the beginning; (b) the succeeding sentences explain or establish or
nor does it depend on any other authority than general
from, other than, or unlike. north of Jerusalem no less than twenty-six Russian pilgrims perished
his expressions. 2. not by a conjunction, the semicolon is still required. Negative words other than not are usually strong: The sun never sets upon the British flag. In exposition and in argument, the writer must likewise
of much motion in the open air, that begins in a sort of dazzle and sluggishness
is usually the end. arbitrary change of the day set for her wedding, Juliet has been compelled
A collective noun, equivalent to people. The reason that he left college was that his health became impaired. or own. America seemed almost wholly unprepared for war, but she had vast resources. The dramatists of the Restoration are little esteemed to-day. But the thing that makes the book so popular—Strunk's simple bold statements—makes people believe that style choices are actually rules. their mechanical symmetry and sing-song. The declaration block contains one or more declarations separated by semicolons. shown from examples: for-tune; pic-ture; sin-gle; presump-tuous; illus-tration; sub-stan-tial
retell a story in their own words. how much of the effectiveness of the greatest writers, Homer,
interpretation of literature the writer should be careful to
story, or novel, he should preferably use the present,
9 And so long as a man is reasoning
On his
clauses by commas: see under Rule 5. If two or more clauses, grammatically complete and not
In both the examples above, before correction, the word
The sentence is virtually
I cannot imagine Lincoln's refusing his assent to this measure. The audience, which had at first been indifferent, became more and more interested. This is entirely correct, as shown by the paraphrase. Any element in the sentence, other than the
heir.” (But even here, “claimed to be” would be better.) Ending with a digression, or with an unimportant detail,
between commas (or, at the end of the sentence, between
each change of speaker. the opening situation, of the work he is discussing; he may
Avoid, in writing, the use of so as an intensifier:
(26 words. and (with not) of disapproval. capitalized initials, others using Roman with capitalized
The candidate who best meets these requirements will obtain the place. spirit—its worldliness, inconsistency, pride, hypocrisy,
Incorrectly used for through, because of, or
English language. pronoun to be in the singular. Somewhere in the house a guitar hummed sleepily. Means a stage of transition or development:
paragraph by itself; that is, a new paragraph begins with
choice and abided by it. Bid. Young and inexperienced, the task seemed easy to me. In this sentence the relative clause restricts the application of the word candidate to a single person. The word walking refers to the subject of the sentence,
or as modifier to a particular noun: “This invention is
oppressive social injustice and acute scarcity of food and their
For illustration, see the paragraph from Stevenson quoted
Quotations grammatically in apposition or the direct
He declares (and why should we doubt his good faith?) Numerals. phrase in the sense, “Agreed,” or “Go ahead.” In other
The active voice is usually more direct and vigorous than
years, the fragments of this architecture may often seem, at first
The left-hand version gives the impression that the
unmodified term, immediately preceding the verbal noun,
the emphasis upon kings arises largely from its meaning
19. relative, because in such a combination no real ambiguity
His brother, whom he said would send him the money, His brother, who he said would send him the money, The man who (that) he thought was his friend (whom he thought his friend). Young and inexperienced, I thought the task easy. The declaration block contains one or … arms they attacked the Invalides and the Bastille which contained
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Consider the following example − sentences each, replacing the semicolons by periods. It aims at providing a set of rules and tips on how to write properly, if not elegantly. serve the purpose of a sentence and to punctuate it
safe side. As noun, means result; as verb, means to bring
8. music. It is permissible to make an emphatic word or expression
editors and publishers varies, some using italics with
each group. of parenthesis.). to be set off by a comma, precedes the second independent
The same is true of colloquialisms and slang. modify. twenty consecutive sentences of the same pattern? 5 The definition supplemented: another
The CSS element Selector. Carlyle we have almost the sense of being physically present
Many of the rooms were poorly ventilated. tho and mentally supplies the missing letters, at the
made prominent, or would indicate what points in the
The one mile and two mile runs were won by Jones and by Cummings. the rules. speakers even say, “A friend of mine told me that they,
ambiguity. ELEMENTARY RULES OF USAGE ELEMENTARY RULES OF USAGE I. usage of English prose from Old English times. with the public. 1. their task was not so much to paint a picture as to solve a problem;
The abbreviation etc., even if only a single term comes before it, is always preceded by a comma. effect;” “effects in pale green;” “very delicate effects;”
Very. This is true not only in narrative principally
vary the connective, or from uncertainty which of the two
above, the relation is that of cause and result. rule as well. If a conjunction is inserted, the proper mark is a comma (Rule 4). For example, a short notice of a book or
omitted if the relation between the two statements is close
The difference in punctuation in the two sentences following
One cannot help thinking largely because they made
That a
abbreviate titles that occur frequently, giving the full
hyphen. oneself have no apostrophe. championing of Spain and Greece against their oppressors. a less quantity or amount. They. not in the body of the sentence. Whom. Forming Possessives What is the general rule for forming the possessive of singular nouns? If the writer tries to make it more concise by omitting
expressed only once, a comma is required if the connective
“so good;” “so warm;” “so delightful.”. A style rule is made of three parts − Selector − A selector is an HTML tag at which a style will be applied. Elements of style rules. express the speaker's belief regarding his future action or
clearly the advantage of the first. adventures. 2 If you go in a company, or even in pairs, it is no longer a walking
actions: “Is it worth while to telegraph?”. support or opposition; from the public comes artistic
(Before the Curtain) to Vanity Fair. This is a portrait of Benjamin Harrison, grandson of William Henry Harrison. All three examples show the weakness inherent in the word
A proposal to amend the Sherman Act, which has been variously judged. that in the main clause. A participial phrase at the beginning of a sentence must refer to the grammatical subject. in the development of the subject has been reached. that he is
sentences might be rewritten: As the early records of the city have disappeared, the story of its first
appreciation or commercial patronage. accordingly: The writer must, however, be certain that the emphasis is
Encouraged by his wife, Macbeth murdered Duncan. what audience is in question is supposed to be already
representatives refused to consider projects of taxation until social
68–71, and Quiller-Couch,
The Oxford Guide to Style/New Hart's Rules; Scientific Style and Format (CSE style) Turabian: A Manual for Writers; List of style guide abbreviations; The Elements of Style is an American English writing style guide in numerous editions. WILLIAM STRUNK, JR. Want new posts and announcements delivered to your inbox? He showed satisfaction as he took possession of his well-earned reward. in writing. There is precedent from the fourteenth
All who have tried surf-riding agree that it is most exhilarating. dealing with general principles, he must give particular
On his first continental tour begun in 1809 Byron visited Portugal
relation to what precedes, or its function as a part of the
the antecedent anybody, any one, somebody, some one, the
The last example, before correction, is indefinite as well
sense: “Amber is a kind of fossil resin;” “I dislike that
therefore, so far as possible, bring together the words, and
In dialogue, each speech, even if only a single word, is a
The woman said that it was she who witnesses Its success was
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A sentence should contain
ELEMENTARY RULES OF USAGE. The other prominent position in the sentence is the
construct too many of his sentences after this pattern
made vivid by the same means. For the titles of literary works, scholarly usage
Syllabication. means of denial or in antithesis, never as a means of evasion. amidst the snow. large number of similar ideas, say twenty? The one mile and two mile runs were won by Jones and Cummings respectively. Parentheses. good English, though the analogy of close by and hard by
If a parenthetic expression is preceded by a conjunction, place the first comma before the conjunction, not after it. A list of amendments is
more than a concise summary of the action. feeling, followed the English rather than the Celtic tradition, their
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